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May 2006

By Alidė Kohlhaas

Why is it that you sometimes read a book, recognize the writer's obvious talent, but feel no love for the work? The case in point is the young writer, Nathan Sellyn, whose short story collection, Indigenous Beasts, made me not want to write a review of it. That is what I usually do if I have nothing good to say about a book. I just put it aside and give it no further thought. But, Indigenous Beasts do not seem to want to die. They clamoring for attention.

Who, first of all is Sellyn? Well, he is not 'Nathan the Wise', that is for sure. He is a young Canadian writer in his early 20s, who now makes his home in Vancouver. He studied creative writing at Princeton University, where one of his mentors was Joyce Carol Oates. He appears to have grown up in Montreal, and Thailand, and was born in Toronto. There is no detailed biography attached to the book, so he is a fairly vague shadow on our literary horizon

In Indigenous Beasts, Sellyn has created a collection of short stories that do not contain many characters of redeeming nature. They indulge in mindless violence, take drugs as if it were candy, are vicious, thoughtless, and whatever else one can say about them that is negative. Many also do not seem to like females very much. Since, from the little research I was able to do on Sellyn, he is a fan of Easton Ellis, whose American Psycho was perhaps one of the darkest, most misogynist novels that has come to us out of the 1990s, one should not be surprised.

There is also a lot of rough language in this novel. Considering the characters that Sellyn has created, that language appears normal. Let's remember that most of us at one time or another used the four-letter 's' or 'f' word when truly upset. So, in itself the language alone does not offend. Here, however, the use of crude language is almost celebrated.

Right on the opening page of the first story, Cleaning Up, we get, "And he hated us. Hated. Under his dark blue jacket and polished brass buttons, old Al fucking hated us." A few lines further down, another 'f...ing' appears in a slightly different context. It is as if the f-word can stand in for a whole range of very good English words to express a wide range of ideas and emotions. What a limited imagination!

This is written by a member of the generation that also uses 'like' to act as substitute for a whole range of perfectly good words. We always say that writers should write about what they know, and hence they should use the language of their time. If Sellyn does know about the experiences of some of his characters, then as a writer, he should have been able to be more creative about when and where he uses such language. It seems, therefore, that here we have a young writer with a very fertile mind, but as yet a very immature one. This short story selection reeks of immaturity, Joyce Carol Oates's teaching notwithstanding, nor the Princeton 2004 Francis LeMoyne Page Prize for Distinctive Achievement award.

Oates is quoted on the back page, "An impressive debut. These are powerful stories, suspenseful and unpredictable, aimed at the jugular." She is right as far as going for the jugular, but suspenseful is really not applicable to these tales. Every good thriller or suspense story in the end does have a purpose, the bad guys — even if they get away to allow the writer to serialize the story (think 007 Bond and his nemesis)— are made to pay some price. Not in these stories. So, they may appeal to the testosterone-driven young males of an uncertain age (who usually aren't readers), but not to a wider readership.

Finally, short stories, even sci-fi or fabulist imaginings have to be believable. Let me just dwell a bit on the final story in this collection, a perfect example of unbelievability. The story, pairing Reality TV with a terrorist attack on Toronto rings hollow, even the indirect slight aimed at Canadian Idol host Ben Mulroney - called here "Alistair, the host, looking every bit as greasy as his former prime-minister father, . . . " lacks any merit and certainly wit. Not that one cares for reality TV, or Canadian Idol. But the aim at Mulroney is 'catty'. It speaks of envy rather than honest satire. Sellyn has a little way to go yet to become a really good writer. Another thing that bothers me about this book and others that use this same technique of gaining attraction. When the cover design features the author's name so large that it overshadows the title of the book and, consequently, appears to be the title itself, we need to ask the question: "Is this so we will not forget the author's name, in this case Sellyn's?" And one more bitch. This is a note to the editor(s) of this book. Prime minister is not hyphenated. By including a hyphen, he has become the minister of prime (Whatever that means? Is it supposed to be tongue-in-cheek in reference to a certain alleged monetary scandal that turned out to cost the taxpayers a lot of dough, and exonerated said prime minister?) not the first minister of the nation. Learn English!

[Indigenous Beasts by Nathan Sellyn, paperback,
181 pages, $22.95 ISBN 1-551-927-9]

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